Talk:Typhoon Nangka (2015)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 13:30, 5 February 2016 (UTC)

Will do. YE Pacific  Hurricane 13:30, 5 February 2016 (UTC)
 * "Typhoon Nangka was a large and strong tropical cyclone impacting central Japan in July 2015. " to "Typhoon Nangka was a large and strong tropical cyclone that impacted central Japan in July 2015. " ("cyclone impacting" just does not sound right). YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Done (an anon actually did it). ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:26, 9 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Effects were worst in Japan" wouldn't it be "worse" in Japan? YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * It compares the effects everywhere, so it would be "worst" since it compares several things. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:26, 9 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "where heavy rainfall reached 740 mm (29 in) in Kamikitayama, Nara Prefecture." "heavy" and the amount just seems redundant. YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * OK, removed. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:26, 9 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "On July 6 after shear diminished, Nangka began to quickly intensify as it developed an eye in the center of the blossoming convection." wikilink eye. YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Done. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:26, 9 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Nearly half of the nation's capital, Majuro, were left without power." shoudln't it be was since "nation's capital" is singular?
 * Yes, done. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:26, 9 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Some coastal flooding was also noted,[27] causing crop damage.[28]" the noting of flooding caused crop damage? YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Changed :P ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:26, 9 February 2016 (UTC)


 * "Across Japan, strong waves and high winds killed over 11,000 tons" imperial or metric? YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Neither, whoops. Talk about WP:OR. o.O ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:26, 9 February 2016 (UTC)