Talk:Typhoon Noul (2015)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:00, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Will review. The article is exceptionally well-written. I have only a few comments: Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 15:00, 1 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much! Hope I got all of these. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)


 * In the lead:
 * I am not sure if this would be redundant - can we add the typhoon season?
 * It's in the second sentence, but I piped the link - annual typhoon season
 * I see. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 04:33, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Link Philippines and Japan
 * Got it. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)


 * In Meteorological history:
 * I think the year should be mentioned at the beginning of the main text.
 * Added. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Philippines is linked twice
 * Got it. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)


 * In Preparations and impact:
 * Duplinks: Federated States of Micronesia, Cagayan, Ishigaki Island
 * Got it. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
 * known as Typhoon Dodong within the country Need not be repeated, this has already been mentioned.
 * I only felt it necessary to emphasize again in the Philippines impact section. Most of the references in the links talk about Dodong, not Noul, so I was on the side of caution. Does that work? ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
 * That's a good idea. Let it stay, then. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 04:33, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks a lot, you have been as fast as a hurricane! I would be happy to promote such a wonderful article. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 04:33, 3 March 2016 (UTC)