Talk:Typhoon Phyllis (1975)/GA1

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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 7 August 2017 (UTC)

That's all. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 00:10, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * "During the first couple weeks of August 1975," - Well no, there are only 4 total weeks in a month. :P
 * And a couple is two so I don't see the problem. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * " In the 24-hours after being designated a typhoon" - No hyphen necessary. Same for the instance later in the paragraph.
 * I've see users with AWB change "24-hours" to "24 hours" throughout my articles in the past, so I just include the hyphen. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * "aircraft data measured a minimum barometric pressure of 920 mbar (27 inHg)" - 27 inHg ranges from 920mb to 950mb. 920mb is more specifically 27.17 inHg.
 * Added |sigfigs=3. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * "The agency continued to track the system until August 20 when it was meandering over the Sea of Japan.[6][nb 1]" - Notes before refs.
 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * "A minimum pressure of 970 mbar (29 inHg) was recorded on Shimizu." - More specific inHg pls
 * See above. YE Pacific Hurricane
 * "Nearby, on, winds of 143 km/h (89 mph) were observed." - What?
 * Missing word. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * "with over 76 mm (3 in) of rainfall fall in an hour in parts of Kochi Prefecture." - No
 * Fixed grammar error. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * " It also contributed to a heat wave that claimed 25 lives." - How?
 * I don't now for sure but probably heat stroke/heat exhaustion. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * woah, thanks :P YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:50, 7 August 2017 (UTC)