Talk:Typhoon Warren/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Opening statement
Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

Prose

 * (Re)Move the citation in the lead (during July 1988.[1]).
 * ❌, that's the only mention of the local name in the article though.
 * I see. Could you move it to the end of Typhoon Huaning, then? – ♠Vami _IV†♠  01:55, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅, good call. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:09, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * At 00:00 UTC on July 14, the JMA declared the system a tropical storm.[6] On the evening of July 14, the JTWC upgraded Warren to a typhoon.[2] Condense.
 * ✅. YE Pacific Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Footnote [nb3] would be useful to have in the lead and/or infobox, too.
 * ✅, moved. YE Pacific Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * one hundred-six [...] one hundred eighty-seven Why not replace these with numerals? You've done the same for other casualty figures in the article.
 * ✅. YE Pacific Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Across the Guangdong Province, Axe "the".
 * ✅. YE Pacific Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

GA progress
Images are free/tagged and relevant. Article passes CopyVio detector. References are credible. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  00:32, 9 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review :D YE Pacific Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)