Talk:Typhoon Yunya (1991)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 04:58, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

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 * Probably worth adding the lahar-related deaths.


 * Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

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 * Similar comment re Diding — Any information on its naming, and how about adding to body of article?
 * Yea this is the exact same situation as before. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * a strong tropical cyclone that weakened before impacting the Philippines — Winds itself in a bit of a circle. Is it really first-sentence worthy?
 * I'll just simplify that down and remove the weakening bit. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * On June 11, 1991, — You read my mind on that one.
 * Kek. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Tropical Upper Tropospheric Trough — Why the caps?
 * Probably because the article was capitalized at some point and I never got out of the habit of lowercasing it. Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * USNS Spica — This thing?
 * Linked. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Although already a tropical storm, the JTWC — First the JTWC struck Hainan, and now it's a tropical storm? Mind you, that might explain how it was able to strike Hainan...
 * Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * destroyed bridges Santa Fe — in Santa Fe? Anything to link to for Santa Fe?
 * Fixed and added. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * prompting concern from residents — Any more details?
 * No and kinda tempted to remove it altogether. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * carried ash within 100 mi away from Pinatubo, — within/away sounds contradictory.
 * Removed the latter. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * As a result of the lahars, ... As a result of the lahars, — Repetition.
 * Changed the second. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Just to confirm, so two bus-terminal rooves collapsed?
 * Yes. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Excluding from laharsh — lahars?
 * Ugh, I was going too fast :P Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:21, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No problem, . Passing now. --Usernameunique (talk) 04:30, 29 April 2020 (UTC)