Talk:Typhoon Zola/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Guam should be linked in the first mention.
 * ✅. YE Pacific Hurricane  16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * The track map differs from the prose. It did become extratropical over the Sea of Japan, but the map shows it tropical at that time.
 * Track map is from JTWC so it's the usual JTWC vs JMA problem that springs up. YE Pacific Hurricane  16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Use some pronouns to refer the storm other than "Zola".
 * Changed two. YE Pacific Hurricane  16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * "7 people" Write out numbers less than ten.
 * Yeah but I chose not to spell out "30". YE Pacific Hurricane  16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * "Thirty-eight homes" This shouldn't be written out, to be consistent.
 * ...or you can write out all the numbers in the sentence.
 * You don't start a sentence with a number. YE Pacific Hurricane  16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * "Sixteen ships" Same here.
 * I mean you're correct here, but I had to stick a "a total of" to avoid the same problem :P YE Pacific Hurricane  16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * And in impact section.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:23, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * The Yen sign should be used.
 * Good call. YE Pacific Hurricane  16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * "Tropical Storm Winona, also assisted" Remove "also".
 * This made no sense till I read the full context of the sentence :P YE Pacific Hurricane  16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review :D YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)