Talk:Typhoons Louise and Marge/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

Doing. Noah Talk 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)


 * reconnaissance aircraft began probing the developing storm USAF I assume... I would also mention the unit involved.
 * There is no mention of USAF or any US military unit involved from the source, I consider any addition to be WP:OR. ❌.  SMB9 9thx   my edits!  02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * torm.[20][21][22].[23] Extra punctuation
 * ✅  SMB9 9thx   my edits!  02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * valued in the millions of Philippine pesos I believe it should be "in" instead of "of"
 * ✅  SMB9 9thx   my edits!  02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Really isn't that much here to correct. Noah Talk 12:52, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
 * It's finished.  SMB9 9thx   my edits!  02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)