Talk:Tyrese Haliburton/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:36, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Am happy to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 17:36, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
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High school career

 * "and shot 18-of-18" - en dashes please

Recruiting

 * "he committed to Iowa State on September 18, 2017." - committed to playing college basketball for

College career

 * "He scored a career-high 16 points on November 26, in an 82–55 victory over Omaha." - He scored a career-high 16 points in a 82–55 victory against Omaha on November 26.
 * "His 17 assists were the most by an Iowa State player in a game," - any
 * "Through 35 games in his freshman season, Haliburton averaged 6.8 points, 3.6 assists, and 1.5 steals per game." - repetition of "game"
 * "On January 4, 2020, he recorded 22 points" - try Haliburton for variety
 * "He was subsequently named Big 12 Player of the Week for his second time." - the
 * "After fracturing his wrist on February 8" - ESPN states it was his left wrist that was fractured

National team career

 * "shooting 8-of-9 from the field," - the hyphens should be replaced by en dashes