Talk:U.S. Route 24 in Michigan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 00:30, 20 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)

 I will place this article on hold for some fixes to be made.  Dough 48  72  00:30, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * The sentence "In 1970, US 10 was moved from its previous routing along Woodward Avenue between Detroit and Pontiac to follow the Lodge Freeway;[22] from the northern end of the Lodge to Square Lake Road near Pontiac, US 10 and US 24 are run concurrently along Telegraph Road and US 10 continues along Telegraph back to Dixie Highway as before" is long and confusing. It may need to be split. In addition, the tense appears to be wrong and the "US 10 and US 24 are run concurrently" needs to be reworded.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * The sentence "The trunkline crosses into Detroit completely north of Fenkell Avenue, which is the 5 Mile location in the Mile Road System of Detroit." needs a citation to support the fact that Fenkell Avenue takes the place of 5 Mile Road.
 * The sentence "Telegraph crosses M-5 (Grand River Avenue), one of the five principal avenues of the Detroit street plan, south of 7 Mile Road." needs a citation to support the fact Grand River Avenue was one of the principal avenues of the Detroit street plan.
 * The Business and connector routes section needs citations.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * It appears part of US 24 was the Dixie Highway. Can some brief history about Dixie Highway be mentioned?
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Fixes applied.  Imzadi 1979  →   01:30, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I will now pass the article.  Dough 48  72  01:32, 20 July 2012 (UTC)