Talk:U.S. Route 50 in Utah/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * I intentionally did not go into detail on the portion of US-50 that is concurrent with other routes. Ideally for the rest one would see I-70 or US-6 (which doesn't yet exist, but on my get around to it list.) If you disagree, and think I should cover the portions concurrent with other routes, please advise.Dave (talk) 18:39, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I actually would like to see some more info, say, on the Wasatch Plateau and the San Rafael Swell. Maybe include some of the geological features that are included in Interstate 70 in Utah? Also, as that article shows, there was a large affect on the swell when the highway was built, so I assume the same things could be said for this route. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone  21:44, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I intentionally did not go into detail on the portion of US-50 that is concurrent with other routes. Ideally for the rest one would see I-70 or US-6 (which doesn't yet exist, but on my get around to it list.) If you disagree, and think I should cover the portions concurrent with other routes, please advise.Dave (talk) 18:39, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I actually would like to see some more info, say, on the Wasatch Plateau and the San Rafael Swell. Maybe include some of the geological features that are included in Interstate 70 in Utah? Also, as that article shows, there was a large affect on the swell when the highway was built, so I assume the same things could be said for this route. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone  21:44, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I actually would like to see some more info, say, on the Wasatch Plateau and the San Rafael Swell. Maybe include some of the geological features that are included in Interstate 70 in Utah? Also, as that article shows, there was a large affect on the swell when the highway was built, so I assume the same things could be said for this route. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone  21:44, 25 June 2008 (UTC)

Overall, good work. There are a few comments, though. To allow for these to be addressed, I placed the article on-hold. Cheers, Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone  02:12, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Thank you for the review. Yes there were some "lone gunman" style edits made within the last 2 weeks. However, the article was previously stable, and since a compromise was hashed out, seems to be stable since. I don't think this is a concern anymore. I agree the prose needs some minor tune-ups. I will address those this week. Thanks again for the review. Dave (talk) 18:39, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for the review and patience. I have incorporated the fixes you have requested. My apologies, I knew some events were coming up that would shorten my free time to work on wikipedia. So I hurried some projects that I was working on. In doing so, my standards dropped. My apologies for nominating an article for GAC that still had basic prose issues. I believe those are resolved now. Dave (talk) 04:56, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Looks much better. I feel I can pass it now, but for FA I'd still like to see more history other than re-routings. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone  00:57, 29 June 2008 (UTC)