Talk:U.S. Route 80 in Arizona/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wyatt2049 (talk · contribs) 12:32, 31 August 2019 (UTC)


 * Are you really sure that "At 13th Street, highways curved east passing the Arizona State University main campus onto Apache Boulevard." is proper grammar? Please, be more thorough.--Jasper Deng (talk) 12:44, 31 August 2019 (UTC)
 * That is not quite what Neutral point of view means. Specifically, please read WP:DUE.--Jasper Deng (talk) 12:47, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

This review is very bad. World War II is going to be all about history, does that mean that it fails NPOV as well? I am going to undo this review and put it back in the queue. Matthew, I apologize that this was your first experience at GAN. --Rschen7754 16:55, 31 August 2019 (UTC)
 * It's not an issue. I appreciate you putting it back in the queue. Either way, he did have a good point on the grammar. That could use some improvement. I'll get right on it when I have time tonight. Honestly, I wasn't really that upset either. It's not the end of the world. But the history thing I have to agree is downright silly. I mean, US 80 is a fully decommissioned highway in Arizona for crying out loud. How is there supposed to be anything current on a road that no longer exists? It is quite literally nothing but history, unless you count the Historic Road designation. -MatthewAnderson707 (talk|sandbox) 19:45, 31 August 2019 (UTC)
 * The biggest issue I had, besides the alleged NPOV issue, was that for something like grammar, the article should have been put on hold for 7 days instead of outright failed. But considering how very cursory this review was (including that there could be areas of improvement that were glossed over), it's probably best to start over with a fresh reviewer. --Rschen7754 23:40, 31 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Other issues? I hope whatever the issues are they're fixable. I've worked on this article now for four years and would like to make it as good as possible. -MatthewAnderson707 (talk|sandbox) 21:52, 1 September 2019 (UTC)