Talk:UHC2030

Paid editing
Please note that this page was written by an employee of the social enterprise Human|Scale Development. Human|Scale Development runs the IHP+Results programme, among other projects in the field of Health Promotion and Advocacy.

This article is about a WHO (World Health Organisation) sponsored programme which is designed to change the way aid is given and spent to make is more reliable and effective. Human|Scale Development is a profit-making company but profits are not sourced directly from the success of the project and therefore this is NOT intended as publicity. We would like to raise the profile of the programme among people who are not professionals in this area. If you think some changes could be made to improve the page please let me know (or make them!)

Many thanks

LauraHSD (talk) 14:11, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Extreme bureaucratese and puffery
This article is so full of "bureaucratese" that it seems like satire: The first sentence says "... is a global platform which brings together multiple stakeholders to take action to advance progress towards ..." What nonsense!

It's not even comprehensible. What does "platform" even mean here?

And can we get some more WP:independent reliable sources?

—&#8288;&#8202;&#8288;BarrelProof (talk) 20:01, 23 May 2022 (UTC)