Talk:UNC Eshelman School of Pharmacy/Archive 1

Jytdog deletions of viable and referenced content
Unsure how my edits were mirroring the schools website when they were referenced with non-unc websites and mirrored other school of pharmacy wiki pages. In the it history appears as though you have repeatedly truncated content on this page, in most cases without justification. I would prefer not to report you for disruptive editing. SithLordSparklePants (talk) 01:37, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
 * I understand from your userpage that you are a UNC alum. That means that you have an external connection, and have a conflict of interest in Wikipedia. I'll leave a note at your talk page about management of conflicts of interest in Wikipedia, and add the "connected" tag above. btw please do read the note at the bottom of the mustard-colored box at the top of this page, along with WP:BOOSTER and WP:PROMO - this page cannot become a proxy for the school's website -- and making website-like content from a directory is just doing that, less directly. Jytdog (talk) 01:49, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
 * What does this edit note, COI was added to talk page and links to Nature Index were removed since other editors viewed them as advertising rather than referencing mean? How is that a reason restore promotional content? (real question) Jytdog (talk) 02:54, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes
Edits are Addition of divisions, centers, deans and degrees thanks SithLordSparklePants (talk)

Edits based on Spintendo review
Edits are getting rid of bulleted list for divisions, centers and degrees and adding text. thanks SithLordSparklePants (talk)

The UNC Eshelman School of Pharmacy is located at the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill with a satellite campus at UNC Asheville.

U.S. News & World Report ranked the Eshelman School the #1 pharmacy school in the United States in 2016.

The school is named after alumni Dr. Fred Eshelman, in part, because of his nearly one-hundred and forty million dollars donated to the school.

Divisions There are five divisions in the school that span the pharmaceutical development pipeline from discovery to implementation. The division of Chemical Biology and Medicinal Chemistry has a focus on drug discovery with areas of research that include optimization of pharmaceuticals through structure–activity relationship, pharmacoinformatics, and high-throughput screening as performed in Center for Integrative Chemical Biology and Drug Discovery (CICBDD). After a pharmaceutical is discovered, it requires formulation for optimal delivery. The Division of Pharmacoengineering and Molecular Pharmaceutics optimizes the delivery of drug. They use drug delivery carriers such as nanoparticles, liposomes, micelles, stem cells, and adeno-associated virus to delivery therapies such as chemotherapeutics, vaccines, small interfering RNA, and immunotherapy to treat diseases like cancer, infectious diseases, and neurodegenerative diseases. This division houses the Center for Nanotechnology in Drug Delivery (CNDD). After a pharmaceutical is introduced into the body, a better understanding of the toxicity, pharmacokinetics, and pharmacodynamics is needed. Gaining this understanding is the focus of the Division of Pharmacotherapy and Experimental Therapeutics. This division has research interests in clinical pharmacology, and development of liquid chromatography–mass spectrometry and other drug detection methods to advance treatments for HIV, cancer, and other diseases. The Center for Pharmacogenomics and Individualized Therapy is housed in this division. After rigorous testing and FDA approval a pharmacist is required to dispense and council on the medication. Training of and pedagogy for pharmacists is carried out primarily by the Division of Practice Advancement and Clinical Education. Finally, after a medication has been on the market, optimization of how the drug is provided is the area of research for the Division of Pharmaceutical Outcomes and Policy.

Degrees Three degrees are offered by the school. They offer a Doctor of Pharmacy (PharmD), which is a professional degree and a requirement to become a pharmacist. In 2014, the school's PharmD program went under a renaissance, changing its curriculum entirely to focus on flipped-classrooms, active learning, and early immersion into experiential learning. A Doctor of Philosophy in Pharmaceutical Sciences (PhD) is also offered by the school. As part of this program, students perform research in one of the focus areas of the school's divisions. A Master of Science in Pharmaceutical Sciences (MS) is also offered, but only in the field of Health System Pharmacy Administration

List of Deans

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— Preceding unsigned comment added by SithLordSparklePants (talk • contribs) 09:42, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

Reply 27-JUL-2018
Also, section headers in the edit request proposal are not necessary, as they conflict with the talk page's own headers and needlessly complicate the table of contents. When ready to proceed with these changes, either alter the template's parameter from ans=yes to ans=no or insert a new template under a level 2 heading. Thank you!  spintendo   10:44, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
 * The context needed for readers to follow along is missing in the sections Divisions, Centers, and Degrees, per #7 of WP:NOTADIRECTORY. This context might be clearer if the information was placed as prose.
 * The list of deans would work, but it contains only 2 pieces of information — the date ranges and the names — meaning a simple list, rather than a table, would work better. (See UCSF School of Pharmacy.)


 * Please make your edits here on the talk page only. Editing of the main article is strongly discouraged. Please read my suggestions above carefully, there are changes to the request that should be done here on the talk page before anything can be implemented. I will place the Deans into a simple list for you.   spintendo   11:10, 27 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks User:Spintendo, sorry for the missunderstanding, I was unclear about your directions. I will try and work the bulleted lists into prose, but will not be able to do so immediately. Thanks for your time with this SithLordSparklePants (talk) 11:24, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

Here's a simpler list, seeking comments & suggestions here first. thnx!  spintendo   12:27, 27 July 2018 (UTC) List of Deans


 * Thanks Spintendo, I added prose and took out the centers, incorporating it in the divisions. Please let me know if you feel there should be additional edits. Thanks for your time and patience with this.


 * The dean's list is unsourced.
 * Much of the content about the centers etc is not about the school but about the subject matter and doesn't belong here (for example They use drug delivery carriers such as nanoparticles, liposomes, micelles, stem cells, and adeno-associated virus to delivery therapies such as chemotherapeutics, vaccines (as noted by Kristy Ainslie), small interfering RNA, and immunotherapy to treat diseases like cancer, infectious diseases, and neurodegenerative diseases.   Not sourced, and not about the school.  It is unclear what the phrase "as noted by Kristy Ainslie" is even doing here. This content is not usable as stated.   Jytdog (talk) 12:59, 27 July 2018 (UTC)


 * this is a talk with :: who has been brought in a third party review to also advise about the COI. As noted first by SithLordSparklePants on Wikipedia talk:Noticeboards and they by Jytdog on Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard and Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring there has been discussion regarding your editing of this page. Please allow this review by Spintendo to continue without your edits. As far as referencing the deans, UCSF School of Pharmacy and Temple University School of Pharmacy does not reference their deans. Also USC School of Pharmacy has similar bulleting listings that were originally posted and removed by Jytdog, but changed to prose at the request of Spintendo. The discussion in the divisions is not that different from what is written is similarly referred in University of Pittsburgh School of Pharmacy. I have been attempting to bring up this page to a standard that is given in parallel schools of pharmacy and I have declared my COI with this and proceeded according to policy as I learned the policy. SithLordSparklePants (talk) 13:53, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Please sign your posts. There is a lot of promotional garbage in WP; that is not a reason to add more. Jytdog (talk) 13:39, 27 July 2018 (UTC)