Talk:US-Canadian War (South Park)

Cleanup
This article has been put on the 'to-do-list' of the SP project main page. It truly is awful. I shall do my best when I have the time. --Naylor182 11:24, 30 January 2007 (UTC)

The grammar and spelling in this article is bad, and realistically it probably doesn't even need to exist, but why should I spoil anyone's fun MGlosenger 09:49, 22 December 2006 (UTC)


 * I have to agree, the grammar in this page is appauling. If I can, I'll try to fix up the grammar. Jacob &quot;Badger Head&quot; Morris 07:55, 11 January 2007 (UTC)

It also has at least one error: Sheila Broflowski is made "Secretary of Offense", not Secretary of war.

I have one more thing to mention, Can you seriously imagine, opening up an encyclopædia to look up a fictional war and reading something as unencyclopædic and badly written as:

"Suddenly a Canadian attack begins. Cartman rushes to turn off the electric chairs and receives a mild jolt that causes the V-Chip to malfunction. The Americans and Canadians start battling each other. Stan finds the "clitoris" which tells him to save Terrance and Phillip. He asks about Wendy, and the clitoris tells him to be confident because "chicks love confidence"."

or

"The US-Canadian War is a fictional war in th movie South Park: Bigger, Longer & Uncut between the US-"Mothers Against Canada" army against the Canadian-"La Resistance" army and then the Hell demon army."?

Canadian-"La Resistance" army would seem to imply that the name of the Canadian army is La Resistance, when La Resistance has no ties to the Canadian army, they only want to "Save Terrance and Philip and stop the war.. and stuff" as Stan says.

Overall, not well written and I think that any relevant information (maybe not much) should perhaps be moved to the main article for the movie.

Dangaz 07:31, 16 January 2007 (UTC)

I have redirected the page without preserving the content. Watch37264 19:59, 6 February 2007 (UTC)