Talk:USS Makin Island (CVE-93)/GA1

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 20:31, 20 September 2019 (UTC)

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:31, 20 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Post-war, she participated in Operation Magic Carpet British post-war.
 * I don't exactly get the gist of this phrase. Could you clarify?
 * Hey Stikky, "Post-war" is the British way the American way is without hyphen "postwar". Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:39, 25 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. I've fixed it. Stikkyy t/c 00:17, 26 September 2019 (UTC)


 * provided a force of 9,000 horsepower (6,700 kW) Link Kw.
 * hangar deck: one on the fore, another on the aft.[3][2][4] Re-order the refs here.
 * equipped with 16 Bofors 40 mm anti-aircraft guns in twin mounts --> "equipped with 16 Bofors 40 mm anti-aircraft (AA) guns in twin mounts"
 * had been modified to carry 30 20 mm cannons Try to avoid two diffrent numbers next to each other.
 * Anti-aircraft guns were mounted around the perimeter of the deck Link anti-aircraft.
 * ferrying 78 aircraft and 236 men to Hawaii Pipe Hawaii tho the territory of Hawaii.
 * Kamikaze is overlinked.
 * who was launched off the deck when a 3.5 inch rocket --> "who was launched off the deck when a 3.5-inch rocket"
 * came under heavy Japanese kamikaze attacks --> "came under heavy Japanese kamikaze attacks"
 * Rear Admiral is overlinked.

Infobox
 * I cannot see the extreme width's length in the body.
 * "10,240 nmi (18,960 km; 11,780 mi) at 15 kn (28 km/h; 17 mph)" Link nmi.
 * Link extreme width.
 * "United States Pacific Fleet (1944-1946)" --> "United States Pacific Fleet (1944–1946)"
 * "1 × 5 in (127 mm)/38 cal dual-purpose gun" this gun is made in the US thus it should have English primary units instead of metric.
 * It has primary units leading over metric units, whilst the Bofors and Oerlikons have metric leading over primary.

Images
 * File:USS Makin Island CVE-93.jpg has a dead link same with File:USS Makin Island (CVE-93) gunnery practice.jpg.

Sources That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:24, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Ref 9, needs a double "p" in the page numbers
 * Ref 13, same as above.
 * Ref 16, same as above.
 * Ref 17, same as above.
 * Ref 18, same as above.
 * Keith's source needs an access-date.
 * All ✅, except for one. Stikkyy t/c 03:49, 25 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Wait a second Stikky. What's this the Navy list on 11 July, and sold on 1 January 1947? It hasn't a citation? Without this I cannot pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 07:46, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
 * All good now. Stikkyy t/c 14:44, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Looks good to go to me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 21:27, 26 September 2019 (UTC)