Talk:USS Michigan (BB-27)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:50, 22 May 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:50, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
 * - lost track of this? Parsecboy (talk) 18:02, 30 May 2015 (UTC)
 * No such luck!


 * No DABs, DANFS link failed.
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * Fix the conversion in the lede with a "|0".
 * Done
 * Link scrap in infobox and lede, main and secondary battery and broadside
 * Added
 * Not entirely, last three items still need links.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:06, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Whoops, wan't reading carefully enough, apparently. Done now.
 * Not exactly. Still need to do main battery, and now add one more for overhaul.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:38, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Proper terminology is "cage mast".
 * Fixed
 * Anything known about casualties or damage from the 1916 gun explosion?
 * Nothing I've been able to find.
 * What does slipped mean? Fell off?
 * Reworded
 * Be sure to make the same changes to South Carolina if relevant.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:23, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Done there too. Parsecboy (talk) 10:32, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * What about the DANFS link ?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:02, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Huh, working now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:06, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Gotta love DANFS... Parsecboy (talk) 16:32, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Went ahead and added a link for overhaul myself as your ability to analyze details seems to be impaired today ;-) Plus I'm getting tired of looking at this review, so I'm promoting it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:53, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Huh, I know I added the link to overhaul - I specifically remember typing out the :wikt:overhaul link - and somehow it wasn't in my edit. Strange. Parsecboy (talk) 19:57, 31 May 2015 (UTC)