Talk:USS Montana (ACR-13)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:50, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:50, 12 March 2016 (UTC)


 * No DABs, external links OK.
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * Don't know if we really need five digits of precision on the beam in the infobox.
 * Good point
 * Fix the rounding of the belt armor in the infobox.
 * Fixed - it was in cm for some reason.
 * Spell out caliber on first use in the main body.
 * Done
 * two four-cylinder vertical expansion remember to vary spelling vs digits for dissimilar things, add a comma after cylinder and a hyphen between vertical and expansion.
 * Good catch, all fixed
 * 3-pounder automatic guns and four 1-pounders What are these guns, Hotchkiss revolvers and Briggs-Schroeders? And add these to the infobox.
 * Dunno on the types, but added to the infobox.
 * Kinda overlinking by repeating links already in the lede, which the script will not detect.
 * I generally prefer to link in both places, which I think is acceptable per WP:OVERLINK
 * Guantanamo Bay, Cuba comma after Cuba
 * Added
 * Should probably link all nations on first use as many readers are geographically illiterate.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:36, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Sadly, a good point. I think I've got them all. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 19:06, 23 March 2016 (UTC)