Talk:USS New Hampshire (BB-25)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nick2crosby (talk · contribs) 15:36, 14 May 2015 (UTC)

User:Nick2crosby review
I think that this should become a good article because I feel that it fits the criteria on the scale. There is enough evidence for I, as a viewer, to understand fully, and thoroughly what the USS New Hampshire is all about.


 * As a more experienced reviewer, I've been asked for my comments by the nominator. I'll get to them shortly and the review should not be marked as completed until then.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:13, 20 May 2015 (UTC)
 * External links OK, no DABs.
 * Why is there a do not transfer to Commons for the line drawing? Images otherwise appropriately licensed.
 * I think that's auto-generated by the PD-US-1923-abroad template.
 * Why fractional feet in main body, but feet and inches in infobox? Prefer the latter.
 * Dunno, but fixed now.
 * Be sure to put conversions to metric measurement to nearest whole digit "|0". And you've got at least one duplicate conversion.
 * Should be good now
 * This reads awkwardly: United States occupation of Veracruz Either "American occupation..." or delete United States entirely.
 * Seems fine to omit the United States entirely.
 * Heroica Escuela Naval Militar academy Translate this.
 * Done
 * What do you mean "slipped"? If the propeller fell off, say so more clearly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:43, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Thanks for taking care of the review. Parsecboy (talk) 18:21, 30 May 2015 (UTC)