Talk:USS Savo Island/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 08:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Could you action the relevant comments from Talk:USS Admiralty Islands/GA1 and Talk:USS Bougainville (CVE-100)/GA1. Once that is done, I'll take a look. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:59, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Stikkyy t/c 17:21, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:37, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

This article is in good shape. I have a few comments: That's all I have, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:37, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * forth→fourth in the lead, but in the body it says twenty-third?
 * suggest "fought in support as part of the Guadalcanal campaign"
 * launchedin
 * say what Operation Magic Carpet was
 * her wl isn't in the body
 * link=on for the power conversion to link kW
 * the install ment ation
 * Bofors 40-millimeter s (1.6 in) anti-aircraft guns, by adj=on in the conversion
 * 20-mm and 40-mm
 * link Clarence Ekstrom and add to the infobox as a notable commander
 * 3rd Fleet? I thought US fleets were spelled ou, ie Third Fleet? Also 7th
 * "island of Peleliu, of in the Palau Islands"
 * say where Manus Island is
 * "She, accompanied with by eighteen"
 * link capital ship
 * Admiral Kurita
 * say Kossol Roads is at Palau
 * the landing craft s
 * suggest "sinking Savo Island's sister Ommaney Bay"
 * suggest "Savo Island's sister Manila Bay
 * plane being began trailing
 * say Ulithi is in the Caroline Islands
 * suggest "Savo Island's sister Kitkun Bay
 * suggest "along with her sisters Marcus Island and Saginaw Bay"
 * suggest "traded for her sister Makin Island's"
 * Ooccupation of Japan
 * link "Operation Magic Carpet" where you first use "Magic Carpet" in the body
 * use the link for Boston Harbor, then link Boston when you get to "Boston group"
 * suggest adding that Clarence Ekstrom was awarded the Navy Cross for his extraordinary heroism and distinguished service in command of the ship during the Battle of Leyte Gulf
 * Rielly is unused
 * ShipbuildingHistory.com and Hazegray.org are marginally acceptable at GA, but I wouldn't be relying on them at Milhist ACR or FAC
 * I've addressed your points, apart from the fact that ship infoboxes appear to not have a parameter for listing commanders. Stikkyy t/c 22:08, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * My mistake, I've asked at the template talk page. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:07, 20 April 2020 (UTC)