Talk:USS Solomons/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:54, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have right now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:38, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Feels that the lead is a little light for this article, consider beefing up the existing para.
 * "and the amount of Bofors" the number of
 * "Washington under" comma after Washington.
 * "under lend-lease" our article seems to call this Lend-Lease, a formal title for that policy.
 * "Navy.. As a " one too many full stops.
 * Check image captions. They mainly seem to be fragments, not sentences, so they don't need a full stop.
 * "Virginia on 16" comma after Virginia.
 * "without much luck" not particularly encyclopedic tone.
 * "BuNo 24295" what is that?
 * "Lt. Cdr. H." this rank is abbreviated, no others seem to be.
 * What is LTJG?
 * And FKpt. ?
 * "Martin PBM Mariner flying boat that" flying boat is overlinked.
 * "External links" fix font size.
 * I've addressed your points. Stikkyy t/c 05:56, 8 September 2021 (UTC)