Talk:USS Takanis Bay/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 15:39, 7 September 2019 (UTC)

Claim this one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 15:39, 7 September 2019 (UTC)
 * on the west side of Yakobi Island in Alaska (near Sitka) Pipe Alaska to the Territory of Alaska.
 * which provided a force of 9,000 horsepower (6,700 kW) Link kW.

Infobox
 * Waterline length isn't included in the body same for the extreme width, installed power and the range.
 * "10,240 nmi (18,960 km; 11,780 mi)" link nmi.
 * "Takanis Bay, Yakobi Island, Alaska" Pipe Alaska to the Territory of Alaska.

That's it, for now, I will continue tomorrow. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Did a bit, can't figure out how to wikilink inside of conversion templates unfortunately. Stikkyy t/c 05:42, 10 September 2019 (UTC)
 * I did it for you. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:39, 13 September 2019 (UTC)


 * one on the fore, another on the aft.[3][2][4] Re-order the ref here.
 * carriers had been modified to carry 30 20 mm cannons Replace "30" with "thirty".
 * MC hull 1126, by Kaiser Shipbuilding Company, Vancouver, Washington. She was launched on 10 March 1944 I do not think we should use the "1944" here.
 * Until the end of hostilities with Japan on 15 August 1945 Pipe Japan with the Empire of Japan.
 * in two trips, she returned 1,300 servicemen from Hawaii to San Diego Same as Alaska pipe Hawaii with the Territory of Hawaii.
 * "Magic Carpet" fleet, and ordered to Tacoma, Washington Merge both links here.
 * She was sold on 29 June 1960 to Hyman-Michaels Company, Chicago, Illinois Split the Chicago, Illinois' link with a link to Chicago and the other one to Illinois.
 * for scrap and broken up in Portland, Oregon Link Portland, Oregon.
 * Why is there a "See also" section? Because it is totally empty.
 * "See also" sections contains the WWII portal bar, but the portal bar's pushed to the bottom of the page by images.


 * the constant turnover of pilots and aircraft for the purposes of training Remove "the purposes of".
 * a steady stream of carrier squadrons were trained onboard You mean "was"?
 * In this time period, between 24 May 1944 to 28 August 1945 Remove "time" here.
 * she qualified a record 2,509 pilots, and engaged in the most landings Remove the comma after pilots.

Sources
 * Y'Blood's book should have a Google Books' URL. Also, Google Books claim the book was made in 2012 and WorldCat claims it was 1999 made. Which one is correct?
 * Originally published in 1999, reprinted in another edition in 2012. I have it in the 2012 version, and it shouldn't matter much.

Images
 * Looks good to me.

That's it, I'll put it on hold. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:37, 10 September 2019 (UTC)
 * All ✅. Stikkyy t/c 04:35, 13 September 2019 (UTC)
 * I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:12, 13 September 2019 (UTC)