Talk:USS Wheeling (PG-14)

Expanding article
The DANFS entry on this ship holds a lot more information this article could use. --Brad (talk) 15:56, 1 February 2008 (UTC)

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Upgraded page with new ship infobox, photo, etc. Upgraded text by entering entire DANFS article on the ship, replacing the existing small amount of text.Wikited (talk) 02:42, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Poorly Written Passage
The following is found in the section on the vessel's participation in the Spanish-American War: "The vessel sustained major hull damage during patrols off the coast of Alaska. The remaining of 15 people who were on the ship, only 12 managed to escape, while the other three were shot in the head by the shinbu cival Indian war tribe. Just in, Shasi Kenbi Yoto who was 88 years old at the time when he was on the boat, was not said shot in the head he had jumped of the boat, and then a bulldog shark ate him as he was frightened. Off the Alaskan Bay, Shinlo Estuvien, (72 year old American) was most definitely a traitor to the others. He signaled the Indians to kill them while on the boat and had stole their money then left. Vlonshiffen Vanpandorf James II was a person who also existed as one of the Indians, but he was no Indian, he was a spy. He was fluent in the language and distracted them so the survivors could get away, which he managed to pull off." As written it makes little or no sense and appears to be a wildly inappropriate insertion. Brothernight. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brothernight (talk • contribs) 17:45, 25 March 2010 (UTC)