Talk:US Radar

Hello, I noticed the following notices on the page: This article needs additional citations for verification. (February 2014) This article appears to be written like an advertisement. (February 2014)

Can someone provide some insight as to how many citations are appropriate for a page. Also, I am curious what is it that is written like a advertisement. When I wrote the content, I made every attempt to make sure it didn't seem like an advertisement.

If someone could provide some suggestions so I can learn what to avoid and how to write pages properly, I would very much appreciate it! Thanks, User:Alvb