Talk:Uduak Isong

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Esamikhafe. Peer reviewers: JeanneOfArc.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:31, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Some revision necessary
Some revision necessary. “the communications industry must have seemed a natural fit.” - Consider revising this sentence. What you have completed for the draft of your article is mostly well written but it is incomplete. While this is a draft it should have been as a complete as possible. There are sentences that are incomplete with crucial information missing. Carefully revise your article and format everything correctly so that it will be ready to post. Otherwise, this is a good start.

Batcow39 (talk) 16:43, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

This is a good start. You have provided an extensive list of her works as well as a detailed list of her training. However, I would suggest a couple formatting corrections. First, I would put the references at the end of sentences and not in the middle of sentences. Then, I would clean up the filmography section only using the table you have done. Then I would put the training either under the education section or right above the career section. Lastly, I would merge the section on Okon in Lagos under the career section. While taking a look at your sources, I found a couple broken links: Salihu, Ejura (September 17, 2015). ""Falling To Premiere On 18th Of September."". Retrieved February 5, 2018 and "Uduak Isong". Talk African Movies do not work. I agree with Batcow39 that there seems to be some information missing such as the subject of the films. You have done a good job of sourcing your information from reliable sources, many newspaper articles, but it would have been great to have other types of sources. Finally you are missing a citation for the early life sentences. JeanneOfArc (talk) 02:01, 11 March 2018 (UTC)