Talk:Ugh! (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:17, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

My 300th GA review now!! --K. Peake 09:17, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "It was released on" → "The song was released on"
 * "while Healy wrote the lyrics about" → "while Healy explained the lyrics are about"
 * The drug-fuelled conversations and social interactions are not directly sourced as inspiration in the body
 * Reworded.  Gia co bbe  talk 13:39, 29 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove "upbeat", as that language is not needed for the lead
 * "wanting to quit" → "attempting to quit"
 * "The track explores themes such as" → "Themes explored on the song include"
 * Pipe neon-lit to Neon lighting

Background and development

 * Wikilink Cheshire on the quote box
 * The word chart is not needed after Billboard 200
 * "number 7 on the US Billboard Top Alternative Albums chart and US Billboard Top Rock Albums chart." → "number 7 on the Billboard Top Alternative Albums chart and number 8 on the Billboard Top Rock Albums chart." with the pipe
 * Don't think the release year of the single is needed in brackets when you are already writing about 2013
 * "deleted their social media accounts and posted cryptic cartoons," → "posted cryptic cartoons and deleted their social media accounts," because the other order reads somewhat confusingly
 * "later to announce a" → "later to announce their absence was for a"
 * "saying the song was driven by" → "saying it was driven by"
 * "he has to younger fans," → "he has towards younger fans," per the source
 * "despite behind a former addict," → "despite being a former addict,"
 * "towards cocaine remained nonchalant:" → "towards cocaine has since become nonchalant:"
 * Maybe you should reword the drug-fuelled conversation and social interactions to make it clearer that they inspired the song?
 * Wikilink Zane Lowe
 * Pipe Beats 1 to Apple Music 1
 * Pipe single to Single (music)

Music and lyrics

 * Audio sample text needs a full-stop at the end, plus remove the second pipe to synthesizer
 * "and has a length of" → "which has a length of"
 * [25] should be after [23][24] instead due to backing up the synth-pop ballad part
 * Wikilink tempo
 * Are you sure the synth squeaks part isn't just repeating the synths info from someone else's POV?
 * [33][20] should be put in numerical order
 * "self-obsession and" → "as well as self-obsession and" to avoid confusion
 * ""Ugh!" is about Healy's" → "It is about Healy's"
 * "and his attempt" → "and his unsuccessful attempts" per the source
 * "he cannot give it up." → "he cannot give his lifestyle up." to be specific
 * Pipe chorus to Refrain
 * "funky 1980s art-pop" → "funky 1980s art pop"
 * "to Scritti Politti." → "to the former."
 * "could make it dreary" → "could make the song dreary"
 * "compared it to the band's" → "compared the song to the 1975's"

Critical response

 * Remove or replace the img, as only two critics make the comparison mentioned
 * "declared it the" → "declared the former the"
 * "with its glowy synth." → "with the glowy synth."
 * "called "Ugh!" delightful, while" → "called "Ugh!" delightful while"
 * Digital Spy should not be italicised
 * "calling it a" → "observing there is a"
 * "the band presented a clear agenda by releasing it" → "the 1975 presented a clear agenda by releasing the song"
 * Shouldn't you start [the track] with capitalisation if you are using the quote as a full sentence?
 * "Healy's vocals, while calling" → "Healy's vocals while calling"
 * Remove pipe on Billboard
 * "commended its "glorious" → "commended the song's "glorious"
 * "move it away from" → "move the song away from"

Commercial performance

 * "and was later ranked at" → "before later being ranked at"

Music video

 * Pipe neon lights to Neon lighting
 * Even though the video continuing the theme of "Love Me" is sourced, the neon being the continuation is not
 * [58]: "While the very soft neon color theme from the "Love Me" video continues".  Gia co bbe  talk 16:59, 29 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "As the band perform," → "As the 1975 perform,"
 * Remove the word retro as the description does not state or imply this
 * [60]: "... new song, 'UGH!' - which continues to perpetuate the band's new retro vibrantly coloured aesthetic".  Gia co bbe  talk 16:59, 29 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "of their debut album." → "of The 1975.

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; nice to review a GAN of yours from a different album this time around! --K. Peake 16:23, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I believe I've addressed/corrected all of your comments, let me know if there's anything I've missed! Also, glad you enjoyed it, this is actually my favourite album of theirs.  Gia co bbe  talk 17:04, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Most of this looks good, but I would like to ask are you sure "muted" is appropriate language for the description of the video continuation? --K. Peake 17:45, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes. In colour theory, muted refers to a colour that lacks saturation, and is a widely recognized descriptor. It wouldn't be considered slang (some more info here and here).  Gia co bbe  talk 18:09, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ time, do not see any further issues and thanks for clarifying! --K. Peake 18:53, 29 March 2021 (UTC)