Talk:Ugly (Sugababes song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hello, I will be reviewing this article. 17:13, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Thankyou, Calvin! Till I Go Home (talk) 07:37, 2 April 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox
✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC) ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Use and
 * Remove the extra tracklising for the album. It's not needed.

Lead
✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC) ✅, Removed quote. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC) ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * "who primarily produced Taller in More Ways." → Sounds like he got first say on producing the album. Change to "who produced the majority of Taller in More Ways.
 * If you are going to have a quote in the lead then you need to put the source for it.
 * link music critics
 * I'll do a slight c/e at the end.
 * Thanks. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Background and release
✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC) ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Taller in more Ways the firs time.
 * was an inspiration for the song. → remove "an"

Composition and lyrics
✅. Expanded it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Need a much better rationale for the audio file. How long is it? What does it present to the listener?
 * I guess there's no much info for the composition but you've done well with what you have.

Critical reception
✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * "Ugly" has received positive reviews from music critics. → "Ugly" garnered positive reviews from music critics.
 * This section is very quotey, can you paraphrase some of them?
 * Could do with a bit of refining.

Chart performance

 * This section needs work. Do you want me to c/e it?
 * Yes please. Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * I think you mean "chart performance" since you already reviewed the critical reception up there (above)? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:47, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes Lol. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 17:16, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

Promotion - Music video

 * Any reviews?
 * Nope. It was a pain to even get info about the music video itself. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Lol. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

Promotion - Live performances
✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC) ✅. Quoted the critics' words. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * 2006 alongside singles → as part of a set list, which included
 * You say that their performances were praised by critics, so can you say what the critics actually said?

Track listings
✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC) ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC) ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Remove the release dates.
 * Single should not to be capitalised.
 * Play should not to be capitalised.

Credits and personnel
✅. Wrote Discogs. If I get the album, I will change it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Where are the credits adapted from? Write it instead of "Source"
 * Hmm okay. Can't you try ASCAP or BMI?  Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

Charts - Weekly charts

 * Please can you have marked up the table according to WP:ACCESS :)
 * Don't understand :S Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * You've done it lol. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * It says 2005/06. There should be two separate tables, one for peaks in 2005, one for peaks in 2006.

Charts - Year-end charts

 * Mark up the table according to WP:ACCESS. Look at S&M's for example.
 * What's mark up? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Done it for you. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One

✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Again, tables should be separated.

Release hsitory

 * No issues :).

Summary
Good job, on hold for 7 days. Aaron  &bull; You Da  One 21:58, 6 April 2012 (UTC)
 * All done :). passed. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks :) Till I Go Home (talk) 03:01, 18 April 2012 (UTC)