Talk:Umbilicaria torrefacta/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 18:32, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 08:07, 15 June 2024 (UTC)

I'll have this reviewed in a few hours. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 14:25, 17 June 2024 (UTC)


 * This goes against MOS, no?
 * Sorry, I'm missing the MoS infraction ... please explain.


 * First is redundant
 * First also redundant here
 * Removed the first instance of "first", added "and named" to the second instance, so that leaving "first" is justified. Esculenta (talk) 14:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Shiny is an odd word choice
 * It's the descriptor used in the original 1777 source. Not really that odd when other qualitative adjectives often used for thallus appearance/texture include matt, lustrous, polished, dull, etc. Esculenta (talk) 14:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Mind merging it with another paragraph?
 * Done. Esculenta (talk) 14:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)


 * nanometre should be plural
 * Fixed. Esculenta (talk) 14:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Can't comment much on prose
 * File:Three tartans.jpg needs author, source, description and date
 * As far as I can see, the Commons page shows the source (upload by Dreamyshade) and date (14 January 2013). I added a caption to the image on the Commons page, but it looks like licensing requirements are met? Esculenta (talk) 14:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

Nothing much to say, except that this is a solid piece of work. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 19:34, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks! My changes are here; still need clarity on the first point. Esculenta (talk) 14:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Never mind; it's no big deal. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 17:08, 19 June 2024 (UTC)