Talk:Umbral Zone (World of Darkness)

Concerns
Someone should really go through these pages and correct the spelling ("travelling" to "traveling"). I would do it myself but it's a tedious task. Since someone (one particular someone it seems by the spelling), decided to make these Umbra entries they should be more than happy to provide the necessary corrections.

As a fan of White Wolf, perhaps it would also be best to accompany these documents with Umbra pictures and resource material (after all there is not one single source cited and while I’m not complaining, it would be good to read up on some of this stuff).

Also there are a number of articles mentioned here that link to other entries. That's fine except those entries mention content that is either not linked or expanded upon. For instance one of the pages link to a "Near Umbra" article that article mentions there being more information on "Celestial Bodies" further on the page. This specific entry (the “Near Umbra” entry) does not contain the information or provide a link to where the information can be found.

Perhaps in this particular example the “Near Umbra” entry should merely link back to this entry for the “Celestial Bodies” information? (This entry does contain the relevant information.) TruthCross 04:20, 7 July 2006 (UTC)