Talk:Umbrella (song)

Last paragraph of "Background and development" makes no sense
I can't fix it because I have no clue what it's trying to say. InspectorMendel (talk) 12:47, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Concur. The paragraph is an incoherent mess.  In my experience, when a paragraph with apparently proper sources is that incomprehensible, either the writer doesn't know how to write, or if you trace back, it used to make sense and then it was heavily vandalized and no one caught it.  But I don't have the time or interest to figure out which scenario is true right now. --Coolcaesar (talk) 22:21, 13 February 2023 (UTC)