Talk:Una-class submarine/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:28, 28 February 2014 (UTC)


 * I cleaned up the infobox a bit, but you need to provide conversions for the diving depth and the power of the motors as well as their usage in the main body.
 * No bullets in the infobox.
 * Capitalize Lieutenant Colonel as it's a proper noun in that usage.
 * Convert 10 meters. In general provide a conversion to English units on the first usage of any measurement.
 * utilizing a Stirling engine change "utilizing" to "the addition of"
 * Hyphenate "single hulled" as it's a compound adjective for design.
 * You do not need to specify the output when converting knots; it automatically converts into kmh and mph.
 * Special forces in the description paragraph needs to be replaced by special forces personnel or naval commandos; something like that.
 * No DABs, no overlinks, external links good.
 * Images appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:24, 5 March 2014 (UTC)


 * First of all, thank you for your fixes. I hope I answered to all of the requests above with the edits I made. Please let me know if I missed something. --Saxum (talk) 14:00, 5 March 2014 (UTC)