Talk:Unfinished Tales/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 17:03, 13 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:16, 13 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Lead's too short and doesn't contain any information from Analysis.
 * Extended.


 * I've performed a minor copy-edit, no other prose concerns.
 * Noted.


 * Not necessary, but maybe put in an appropriate image in the analysis section.
 * Added.


 * References are reliable and correctly formatted.
 * Noted, thanks.


 * Olsen, Corey (2014). "Unfinished Tales". Mythgard Institute. Signum University. Link automatically triggers a blocker for some reason.
 * Doesn't trigger my blocker app. There's nothing much wrong with Mythgard.
 * No, I meant that Mythgard blocks me from accessing it for some reason.


 * Spot-checks:
 * Barkley, Christine (1996). "Point of View in Tolkien". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
 * Riga, Frank P.; Thum, Maureen; Kollmann, Judith (2014). "From Children's Book to Epic Prequel: Peter Jackson's Transformation of Tolkien's The Hobbit". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
 * Kocher, Paul H. (1981). "Reviews: Unfinished Tales". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
 * Noted.


 * All I really have. AryKun (talk) 13:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:36, 16 August 2023 (UTC)