Talk:Ungodly Hour/GA1

GA Review
This review is transcluded from the article's talk page.

Reviewer: VersaceSpace (talk · contribs) 17:03, 29 April 2021 (UTC)

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Gonna review this. It may be worth noting that I added some content to the article a few months ago, but all of it has been re-written by an unrelated editor, so it'll be fine. versacespace leave a message!  17:03, 29 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * "but did not win in any category" can be omitted because this is implied already by the fact that they "were nominated".
 * Also that inline citation in the second para is making me gag
 * Infobox is good


 * ✅ -- dylx  (t &#124; c) 04:13, 3 May 2021 (UTC)

Background and recording

 * specify what grammy awards the kids were alright were nominated for


 * ✅ -- dylx  (t &#124; c) 04:13, 3 May 2021 (UTC)

Composition

 * "record with elements" -> "record which contains elements"
 * The inline citations here should go behind each genre (behind the comma as well)
 * Why is this section so short? Can we at least have a paragraph?

Concept and themes

 * at the end of the section, why are single quotations used for the song lyrics when they aren't inside any normal quotations?


 * ✅ -- dylx  (t &#124; c) 04:13, 3 May 2021 (UTC)

Release and promotion

 * The vinyl release still has a citation needed tag

Live performances

 * "Do It" is wikilinked too many times here.
 * "Forgive Me" is linked too much as well.


 * ✅ -- dylx  (t &#124; c) 13:02, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Good

Year-end lists

 * Good

Awards and nominations

 * Good

Commercial performance

 * This section doesn't present a worldwide view of the topic. The album charted in other countries. How did it do there?

Track listing

 * For track 8, "with Swae Lee and Mike Will Made It" doesn't need to be in small font.
 * ✅ -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 13:04, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Throughout the section, the track markers in small font marked "1, 2" should be "1-2". Same with other chronological numbers.
 * ✅ -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 16:37, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Instrumentation

 * Wikilink the first instance of "strings" to string instrument
 * ✅ -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 16:37, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * Wikilink the first instance of "production" to music producer
 * ✅ -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 16:37, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Technical

 * Wikilink the first instance of "mixing" to music mixing
 * Wikilink the first instance of "engineering" to music engineer
 * ✅ -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 16:37, 5 May 2021 (UTC)

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

General comments

 * That summarizes my concerns so this is.
 * Oh, one more thing, wiki-linked songs should only be wikilinked on the first mention, in the tracklist, and in the infobox

Comments by other users (including the nominator)
about the citation needed tag about the vinyl release, I don't see it on my end. can you specify where it appears so I can remove it? thank you! -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 12:25, 6 May 2021 (UTC)


 * looks like its been fixed already versacespace  leave a message!  12:27, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

another thing: I can't un-wikilink Twitter in ref 29, since it uses the {cite tweet} template. do you want me to replace the reference? -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 12:45, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I also can't un-wikilink Official Charts in refs 113 and 114, since they were created using the {album chart} template. -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 13:06, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
 * eh...in that case, I guess both could be left as is versacespace  leave a message!  13:08, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
 * okay! I believe up to this point, I've addressed all your concerns! thanks for taking the time to review this article, I appreciate it! -- dylx  (<b style="color:hotpink;">t</b> &#124; <b style="color:hotpink;">c</b>) 13:27, 6 May 2021 (UTC)


 * , this looks good! I'm passing this article. ✅