Talk:Unified (concert)/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 15:08, 14 April 2024 (UTC)


 * @Pseud 14 These are the things that have to be addressed! Arconning (talk) 10:05, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking this review. All actioned and responses provided. Let me know if clarifications are needed. Pseud 14 (talk) 12:48, 8 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 11:08, 6 May 2024 (UTC)


 * I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Good luck to the editors! Arconning (talk · contribs)

Lede

 * in partnership with Pinoy Box Office,, add the before Pinoy.
 * Ticket sales was handled by TicketNet, with Colgate as a major sponsor., change was to were.
 * Both done

Background and development

 * leading up to the event, change to the lead up to the event.
 * Done

Concert synopsis

 * before transitioning into a Adele and Whitney Houston tribute number., change a to an.
 * Done

Reception and recording

 * No issues.

Set list

 * No issues based on grammar or MoS.

Refs

 * References are reliable, hopefully reference [17] could get replaced as it's a primary source, but if there are no other sources available will do a conditional pass.
 * The source in question is the media itself since the quotations and the interviews referenced in the behind-the-scenes are directly taken from this source, per Cite AV media notes, and no other independent secondary sources were available (from what I've checked)
 * Please supply more sources for the Concert synopsis section.
 * Similar to above, MOS:PLOT or WP:PLOTCITE applies here. Plot summaries generally do not include in-line citations. However, alternatively, concert synopsis can use the actual recording as a primary source. I have not seen additional sourcing that details a review of the full concert, so I think the use of the actual media sample use is sufficient. (See similar FA/GA articles, and similar discussion from GA reviews R2K: The Concert, Freedom, Songbird Sings Legrand Review)

Spotchecks

 * Earwig and manual spotcheck show up nothing. Pass.

Images

 * Image has proper license. Hopefully put pictures of Velasquez and Geronimo during that year in Background and development section.
 * Unfortunately none that exists for that year. Also, images that are not related to the event are usually not recommended, unless they are images taken from the concert itself.

Misc.

 * Stable, no ongoing edit war, focused on the topic, broad in its coverage, fair bias.