Talk:Unihemispheric slow-wave sleep/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 11:24, 18 February 2012 (UTC)

Review of this article seems to have stalled or been discontinued so I will have another look at it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:47, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

Comments
In general this is a well written and interesting article. My main concern is with the references as mentioned in the table above. Where did the unreferenced information come from? Was it original research? I am also puzzled by the lead sentence " ... while a low voltage electroencephalography (EEG), characteristic of wakefulness, is present in the other." Is the word "electroencephalography" used in its correct form here or should the sentence be rephrased? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:54, 2 March 2012 (UTC)