Talk:Unisphere/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:59, 26 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Move the short description to the top of the article.
 * "approved of Clarke's proposal" "approved Clarke's proposal"
 * "drawn a sketch of" "sketched"
 * "draw a sketch of" "sketch"
 * "retaining wall" "a retaining wall" or "retaining walls"
 * "made of a sturdy low-alloy steel" "made of sturdy low-alloy steel"
 * Remove the comma after "the number of satellites".
 * "which representing" – reword (located in alt text in #Base)
 * Add a serial comma between "several films, music videos and episodes".
 * Wikilink Blake Gopnik, Herbert Muschamp, Pam Belluck, Charlie LeDuff, James Barron (journalist)], and [[David W. Dunlap.
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:00, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 22:41, 26 July 2021 (UTC)