Talk:United Nations Command–Rear/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 13:41, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
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Discussion


Referencing.
 * Could you directly cite "invading hordes".
 * Could you directly cite ""prior to entry" except in "cases of emergency or where security is involved"".

General.
 * "under Douglas MacArthur". I think that you need to either add his wartime successors or delete this.
 * Suggestion only. It may be worth linking Status of forces agreement at first mention.
 * Suggestion only. It seems MOS:OLINK to me, but that is not a GA issue.

Prose.
 * "The Mandarin" should be in italics.
 * "From 1978 until at least 1987, the Philippines provided an officer to lead UN Command Rear." This reads oddly. Is the precise date on which command was handed over not known?
 * "UN Command-Rear is also charged with providing legal notice to Japan about the entrance of military forces from..." seems a little clunky. Change "about" to 'regarding'?

Images.
 * The caption in the penultimate image. I think that 'notional' would work better than "nominal". (Pedant's corner.)

Infobox.
 * "command staff" - should be upper case C. "protocol, liaison" - P.
 * Gog the Mild - Thank you very much, for this thorough review. I've made all of these changes, however, please let me know if I missed anything. To point 2 in Prose, the source is dated 1987 at which time the Philippines had command. For that reason I don't have the precise end date of Filipino command other than it lasted until at least the date of the source. Unfortunately, despite my best efforts, I have been unable to locate an alternate source which provides this information. Chetsford (talk) 20:33, 12 May 2018 (UTC)