Talk:United States Capitol cornerstone laying/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:09, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 06:09, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * No need to include citations in the lead unless the claims mentioned are really controversial.
 * The lead should be expanded by at least a few lines more, it looks too short now.

Background

 *  of the planned capitol building Please mention the name of the building when you begin with the main text

Ceremony

 * which had been named for him two years earlier We need not mention this, can be cut out.
 * Georgetown silver smith Caleb Bentley Should it not be "silversmith"?
 * Does "ox" need a link?

I guess that should be all. Well-written and pleasant article. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 12:55, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Sainsf Sorry for the delay and thanks again for your patience. I believe I've made all these updates now, let me know if I missed something. LavaBaron (talk) 23:00, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, you have dealt with all the issues. Happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 03:59, 15 April 2016 (UTC)