Talk:United States World War I Centennial Commission

Contested deletion
This page is not unambiguously promotional, because it is intended to be a basic overview/brief info about a government commission. The page does not solicit viewers for donations, or support of any kind. If there is any language that is ambiguous/cause for concern, please tell me how I can edit that so it is not an issue. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ww1cc (talk • contribs)
 * @Ww1cc: I'm glad to see that the article's promotional content is gone. However, there are still many things wrong with the article:


 * It does not meet Wikipedia's quality standards. See WIAA for more information.
 * It does not credibly indicate why or how it's subject is important or significant.

Please address these issues, and this article may or may not be worthy of inclusion. If you have any additional comments, please feel free to respond. Heat Is  Cool  00:25, 26 July 2016 (UTC)

I have begun making changes per your feedback. Am I still missing anything/need to address any issues? Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ww1cc (talk • contribs) 16:48, 26 July 2016 (UTC)

Recent changes
I recently made some changes that were seen as "non-constructive" as posted on my talk page. The changes were being added gradually and I was not done with the article by the time it was reverted. I cleaned up content changing clusters of texts that the commissioner section appeared as and creating them into a box chart, adding a appointed by section, with the names of notable figures and organizations the appointed them. I also did other clean up work to make the page more readable and added content. I'm hoping that the revert was a mistake. Thelosthistorian (talk) 14:53, 20 November 2016 (UTC)