Talk:United States v. Kagama/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Darkwind (talk · contribs) 05:13, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Criteria
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Discussion

 * Bonus points: MOS:HEAD states that section headings should be in sentence case, not title case, and this applies to subsections as well. I'd suggest using sentence case for all of the subsection headings, but this is not required to pass the GA review. &mdash;Darkwind (talk) 06:19, 24 November 2013 (UTC)
 * They *do* need to be self-consistent within the article, however. Some of the subsections are in sentence case, some are in title case. Pick one and stick with it. &mdash;Darkwind (talk) 06:33, 24 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I'll strike out each note in the tables above as they are addressed; I'm sure we can get this done in no time. &mdash;Darkwind (talk) 06:37, 24 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Addressing:
 * 1.(a), bullet 6, section headings.
 * Background: one word, no change needed.
 * Crow Dog: proper name, no change needed.
 * The Major Crimes Act of 1885: proper name, no change needed.
 * Hoopa Valley Reservation: proper name, no change needed.
 * The crime: done, sentence case.
 * The path to the Supreme Court: done, sentence case.
 * Opinion of the Court: Court, when referring to the Supreme Court, is always capitalized as a proper noun.
 * Arguments: one word, no change needed.
 * The Supreme Court’s decision: done, sentence case.
 * Subsequent developments: already sentence case, no change needed.
 * Trial of Kagama: already sentence case, no change needed.
 * Consequences of the decision: already sentence case, no change needed.
 * Criticism of the decision: already sentence case, no change needed.
 * The rest are all good.
 * 1.(b), bullet 2, done and moved to correct location.
 * 6.(b), bullet 1, reduced image of Crow Dog from 250px to 150px.
 * 6.(b), bullet 2, no, there were no images anywhere (free to use or not) of Kagama, Iyouse, or Jenks.
 * I'll work on the others a little later. Thanks for reviewing this!   GregJackP   Boomer!   08:19, 24 November 2013 (UTC)


 * 1.(a), bullet 1, added sentence to preceding section ("The crime") stating that the indictment alleged it occurred on the rez, when it was north of the rez.
 * 1.(a), bullet 2, fixed.
 * 1.(a), bullet 3, fixed.
 * 1.(a), bullet 4, fixed, reservation is now lower-case except in name of the rez itself.
 * More to come.  GregJackP   Boomer!   18:22, 24 November 2013 (UTC)


 * 1.(a), bullet 5, changed fn3 to the structure of fn2. If I am misunderstanding what you are getting at, let me know, but I basically made fn3 into a full sentence.
 * 1.(b), bullet 1, removed cite, added sentence on modern criticism.
 * I'll find refs for the 2.(c) issues. GregJackP   Boomer!   20:00, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * 2.(c) added references to "Consequences of the decision" section.
 * That should complete the needed fixes.  GregJackP   Boomer!   20:43, 26 November 2013 (UTC)