Talk:University of the Sciences/Archive 1

Copied text
This article extensively uses text copied from the USP website. The text was added by Crewman85 about a year ago. This needs to be gutted and rewritten. Night Gyr (talk/Oy) 01:32, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
 * A whole bunch more copied text was added in Sept 2007 by 63.238.184.235. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Austinmurphy (talk • contribs) 15:37, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

Lilly
Josiah Lilly's accomplishment seems redundant. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.241.29.141 (talk) 20:20, 14 June 2008 (UTC)

History
The history begins with "was a PCP professor" without any context or reference to that a PCP professor is. Is it a location? A title? --98.118.211.10 (talk) 16:30, 1 February 2011 (UTC)
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phencyclidine --68.163.53.3 (talk) 03:40, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
 * PCP = Philadelphia College of Pharmacy, the original name of the school — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aemathisphd (talk • contribs) 20:14, 5 January 2013 (UTC)

Major revision
Have completed a major copy edit and article content revision. Changes not detailed in the limited space of the edit summaries include: rearranging History to a chronological presentation; adding historical facts found while searching for appropriate references; adding references and inline citations throughout; expanding and verifying the Historic contributions of faculty and staff; expanding the Academics section to include Accreditation details and refs; creating a Campus section and moving appropriate material to it; editing all copy for NPOV; removing unsourced list of "Alumni contributions" that listed no ties to either alumni or to USciences. Objections listed in the earlier Talk page critiques listed above should now be resolved. Ref-improve and Multiple-issue tags have been removed.Writeswift (talk) 01:24, 11 December 2020 (UTC)