Talk:Unlocked (Alexandra Stan album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 17:51, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I'm  Azealia 911  talk  and I'll be reviewing this article against the good article criteria. A full review is to come within a couple of days, thanks.  Azealia 911  talk  17:51, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

General

 * There are some really basic grammar issues throughout the article. I advise you make a request for the article to be copy-edited. However, this shouldn't discourage you from altogether trying to improve articles on here. Personally, if I were a 13 year-old Romanian I'd have no idea where to start on creating English Wikipedia articles, you're doing a fantastic job. Everything just needs somewhat fine-tuning. With this being said, comments about grammar and sentence structure will be kept to a bare minimum.

Credits and personnel

 * The reference sentence at the beginning of the section needs a full stop.


 * The four opening recording sentences need full stops.


 * Per MoS:DASH, dashes ( - ) should not be used, so replace all instances of them in the section with ( – ) that.


 * There's no need to capitalize after dashes, so change "Songwriter" to "songwriter", apply this to all other fields.


 * Why is there only two instances of (track #)? either use them for all credits or none.


 * Why are songwriters credited under 'Technical credits'? Songwriting isn't technical.


 * 'remixer' isn't a word.


 * Unlink Alexandra Stan in the 'Technical credits' section.


 * Erik Lidbom is credited with 'producer, additional production' why is this? How can he only be 'additional production' but also be a principal producer?


 * When faced with a long list of people who pretty much do the same thing (such as 'technical credits', organize them alphabetically, by last name)

Charts and sales

 * Remove the 'Singles' section alltogether, it's already listed at Alexandra Stan discography and consensus has been to remove these sections in similar discussions.


 * Capitalize the N in None

Release history

 * Countries shouldn't be linked.


 * "U.K." → "UK"