Talk:Unmitigated communion

Much more editing is needed
This article reads like a poor, unedited translation. Someone who is expert in the subject matter and who cares about the reader's ability to comprehend the subject needs to be put in charge of editing it AND of backing up the statements and opinions with sourcing. It is an interesting topic about something that is fundamental to human interactions with each other and with their society. Someone needs to delve into the project of improving the article.

Endfeld (talk) 15:59, 7 February 2024 (UTC)