Talk:Unrequited (The X-Files)/GA1

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 18:34, 1 January 2013 (UTC)

I will be performing a review later today. TBrandley (what's up) 18:34, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * "aired" perhaps "originally aired"?
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Upon linking "Monster-of-the-Week", please do not include the quotation marks
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Check the lead's first paragraph usage of "episode" at the near beginning of their first sentences, and perhaps replace some with different words
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "the mysterious murder of a U.S. Army Lieutenant General has Mulder and Scully racing against the clock to stop a seemingly unstoppable and invisible assassin" how can you assure that all of that sentence represents a neutral point of view, and not personal analysis.
 * I believe I rewrote this adequately.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "American POW's still being kept in Vietnam" that provides a link to Vietnam War POW/MIA issue, but it is not publicly visible generally, so per WP:EASTEREGG, I would suggest stating the Vietnam War in the article's context, place the link there, hence why you should then removing the Easter egg link
 * I tried to move it down. The wording is still different, but I feel it is now in a more appropriate place.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * The same seems to go for "mark their kills"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "warehouse, duly" unnecessary comma?
 * Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * In the production section, link "Jericho Park" per WP:UNDERLINK
 * Unfortunately, the page does not exist.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Could you dig up some information about the British broadcast in the reception section, which would be beneficent to the article
 * I found the airdate, but that's really all. It's better than nothing, I guess.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "Wanting to Believe: A Critical Guide to The X-Files, Millennium & The Lone Gunmen" bibliographical works should be in italics per WP:ITALICS
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

TBrandley (what's up) 03:24, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. How does it look now?-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)