Talk:Until the Whole World Hears/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * Put specifics in recording location, instead of "Various locations in the United States"
 * Fixed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Lead

 * Two album cuts, "To Know You" and "Joyful, Joyful", also appeared on the Christian Songs chart, peaking at Nos. 27 and 3, respectively. → Replace "Nos." with "numbers"
 * Fixed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Background and songwriting

 * No issues

Composition

 * ...as 'pure American rock',[6] 'soft adult contemporary',[3] and 'CCM';[6] → Put period at end of "CCM"
 * Fixed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
 * One critic observed that most of the songs on the album... → Start the sentence with the name of the critic
 * Fixed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Another theme present throughout the album i... → Not a complete thought and without a source
 * Whoops, brainfart there. Removed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Combine two subsections into one section as both are two small to warrant subsections
 * Fixed.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Release and sales

 * Billboard magazine ranked Until the Whole World Hears as the best-selling Christian album and the 37th best-selling album overall of 2011.[13][14] It also ranked as the 3rd best-selling Christian album and the 137th best-selling album overall of 2011.[15][16] → Combine sentences into paragraph above in section
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Subsection is not necessary; put "Singles" information in second paragraph of section
 * Done.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Reception

 * Debra Akins of Gospel Music Channel.com said the album... → Wiki-link entire phrase of "Gospel Music Channel"
 * Fixed - I thought it winkilinked '.com' add-ons, but I guess it doesn't.  Toa   Nidhiki05  14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

 * No issues

Personnel

 * No issues

Charts and certifications

 * No issues