Talk:Untitled (Hodgy Beats EP)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 11:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * "Lyrically the record features lyrics about self-refection" - How about "Lyrically the record deals with..." or similar, to avoid repetition
 * "The EP was announced on Hodgy Beats' official Twitter account on February 20 2012 " - comma missing
 * "It features no production from Odd Future producers," - how about "Unlike in the previous records (if that is true), Odd Future did not contribute in the production" or "Odd Future did not play a role in the production"
 * Why is "Plies" in italics?


 * All corrected.


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Source of the file: Page not found--Kürbis (✔) 11:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Source of the file: Page not found--Kürbis (✔) 11:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Source of the file: Page not found--Kürbis (✔) 11:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Corrected


 * 1) Overall: Hold--Kürbis (✔) 16:54, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:

I believe your concerns have been corrected properly. Bruce Campbell (talk) 20:08, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I will pass, congrats! Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 20:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)