Talk:Untitled (Richard Fleischner artwork at Alewife station)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:04, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:45, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "by Richard Fleischner located" can we say something like "American artist" or some similar wording?
 * "artwork - an environmental" en-dash, not hyphen.
 * "landscape - cost $" ditto.
 * "cost $40,000 to" inflate.
 * I did the inflation in the main section, where it works better in parallel to the other inflation.
 * "on a parcel nested" is that a "parcel of land"?
 * "the massive 5-story" massive not needed, and I would say "five-story".
 * "from the Arts on the Line project" is it worth noting in the lead that this work was one of this project's outputs?
 * I think the year of creation should be in the Artwork section somewhere.
 * It's already in the lede and the history; I don't think the date is particularly relevant to the description of the artwork itself.
 * "Council's Arts on the Line program" link this first time.
 * " $695,000 USD" I don't think you need $ and USD. Also inflate.
 * Any critical reception for this piece of work?
 * Not that I can find at the moment, unfortunately, but I'll check that 1987 article when I find my copy.
 * Check references, plenty of spaced hyphens or year range hyphens/page range hyphens that should be en-dashes.
 * Ref 6, avoid SHOUTING.
 * Other categories, like "Sculptures in Massachusetts" may be better suited than just a basic "Cambridge, Massachusetts" category.
 * And what about Category:Granite sculptures in Massachusetts?
 * ✅ Good catch!
 * Any critical reception for this piece of work?
 * Not that I can find at the moment, unfortunately, but I'll check that 1987 article when I find my copy.
 * Check references, plenty of spaced hyphens or year range hyphens/page range hyphens that should be en-dashes.
 * Ref 6, avoid SHOUTING.
 * Other categories, like "Sculptures in Massachusetts" may be better suited than just a basic "Cambridge, Massachusetts" category.
 * And what about Category:Granite sculptures in Massachusetts?
 * ✅ Good catch!
 * Other categories, like "Sculptures in Massachusetts" may be better suited than just a basic "Cambridge, Massachusetts" category.
 * And what about Category:Granite sculptures in Massachusetts?
 * ✅ Good catch!
 * ✅ Good catch!
 * I believe I've addressed all your comments. (And don't forget about Talk:River Works station/GA1 :) ) Pi.1415926535 (talk) 18:10, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
 * I won't [|forget]. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:12, 31 August 2021 (UTC)