Talk:Up All Night: The Live Tour/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:42, 20 June 2013 (UTC)


 * One dead link
 * Fixed. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * worked out the video production → Not very encyclopaedic
 * Better? Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * its performance of "Moments → Lacking an end quotation mark
 * Done. 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd suggest using a the certification table like on Music of the Sun or Rated R (Rihanna album) as it has symbols for which countries are based on sales or shipments.
 * I hate working with that table. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * It's a lot simpler to use, and more informative. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   21:00, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * A release history table would be useful. Say UK, US, Australia, and some of Europe.
 * The first section covers that.. It was released worldwide. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * FN2 should use cite web and not cite news, as Hearst Corporation shouldn't be in brackets.
 * Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Same for FN3, Viacom shouldn't be in brackets.
 * Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Apply this to FN8 and FN9
 * Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

Although its a short article with only two sections of prose in the main body of text, it is well written. On hold. — AARON  &bull; TALK   19:01, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * Thanks for reviewing and the compliment . Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   21:00, 21 June 2013 (UTC)