Talk:Up All Night (30 Rock)/GA1

GA Review
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The article's looking alright, but here are a few suggestions for improvement: Otherwise, everything looks okay. The article will be on hold for a week so good luck making changes in that time. I've also noticed you have quite a few GANs going at the moment, so it'd be much appreciated if you filled out a review or two of some other articles :) — 97198   talk  07:21, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
 * It was written by, the series' creator and executive producer, Tina Fey and it was directed by Michael Engler - comma confusion. Get rid of the one after "written by" and add one after "Tina Fey".✅
 * Why is February 08 used, not just February 8? I've never seen this done before - I went to WP:MOS and it didn't say anything about this but uses examples like "March 5" and "7 January" without the zeroes.✅
 * Guest stars in this episode included... - the episode still exists, therefore it still "includes" many guest stars.✅
 * It's Valentine's Day and the TGS cast and crew have to pull an all-nighter - use "it is" to avoid contractions, and although "pull an all-nighter" is probably the best descriptive term to use, it probably isn't the most uncyclopedic or formal. Could we reword?✅
 * Cerie reveals that she in fact does not have feelings for Kenneth - we've just used the phrase "to have feelings for" so maybe mix it up and use something else like "she is not attracted to Kenneth".✅
 * Soho Grand Hotel - "SoHo"? That'd be the correct NY spelling, but I don't know if there's a sign or something that actually appears in the show...?
 * A sign doesn't appear in the episode, but during the end credits, the hotel's credit (for product placement) is spelt Soho.
 * Liz has received a gift, of chocolates and flowers, from a supposed secret admirer - either remove the commas or the work "of".✅
 * Pete has forgotten that it's Valentine's Day and that also happens to mean that is his wife, Paula's, birthday - how about "...it is Valentine's Day, which also happens to be his wife Paula's birthday"? A few changes in there.✅
 * He spends the night running around to city - "the city"?✅ typo
 * she would appear in various episodes in a different role - "in different roles"?✅
 * 6% of all 18–49 year olds watching television at the time of the broadcast in the U.S. - it looks weird, but there need to be another full-stop/period at the end of the sentence after "U.S.".✅
 * Canning rated this episode "8.5 out of 10" - no need for the quotes, it's a rating that can be taken out of context.✅
 * Great, I'm happy to pass the article. — 97198   talk  02:06, 17 August 2008 (UTC)