Talk:Up in Smoke Tour

Somebody that can actually write in the English language needs to re-write this page. It makes me want to cry.
 * Agreed. It's on my to-do list. Riana ⁂  20:44, 14 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Listen, I spent time on this article, you may not like it, but then improve it, instead of just deleting the half of it.
 * Waitingfordresdetox (creator of the page)
 * I Just read your userpage, Riana, your hobbies are chemistry, singing in a choir, and your from Australia, What is a person like you cryin' about a westcoast hardcore hiphop page??
 * So a person can't improve an article if it has horrid English? I'm a hip-hop fan, and I think she has every right to try and fix any grammatical errors she sees. --- Efil4tselaer: Resurrected 19:48, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
 * She has every right to improve my grammar, cause that's not my best point, but the only thing ya'll do is deleting the most of my article. My grammar is good enough to know improve is something different as deleting. And by the way, most of my information comes from the interview on the DVD, and for example the Detroit Incedent was something they were telling, using that words and sentences on the DVD.
 * Waitingfordresdetox

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Article approach
This article needs to reference teh DVD more and the tour less. Obviously it will mention the tour, but it should be from the aspect of the DVD.--Esprit15d (۝ • ۞ • ▲ ) 13:37, 9 November 2007 (UTC)
 * I completely disagree. The article should maybe briefly mention the DVD, which is only notable because it is a DVD of the tour. The DVD could really not be mentioned at all.--24.90.14.214 (talk) 07:49, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

Tour's success and incidents with police
Both need to be explored in article.--24.90.14.214 (talk) 07:49, 9 January 2009 (UTC)