Talk:Upminster Bridge tube station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DavidCane (talk) 00:27, 8 February 2010 (UTC)

Comment

 * PASSED The article is close to a pass, but there are a couple of items that need to be addressed first:

Introduction

 * ✅ Upminster and Barking stations should be linked on first usage.

History section

 * ✅ Suggest you link "After nationalisation of the railways in 1948" to Transport Act 1947.

Design section

 * ✅ Suggest replacing "typical 1930s railway architectural style", which is requires prior knowledge of what that was and is possibly different in other parts of the world, with a link to Art Deco.
 * I don't think that it is necessary to go into quite the level of detail on all of the visually impaired works; this could be covered in a more general sentence.
 * It's only a few words and it gives a clear idea of what was done. Mephiston999 (talk) 01:18, 8 February 2010 (UTC)

Location section

 * ✅ "Hornchurch" side does not need quotes.
 * ✅ The station is only served by Underground trains so the first four words of "On the London Underground the station..." could be removed.

Services

 * ✅ "Journey time to Upminster is two minutes, to Barking is approximately 20 minutes, and to Aldgate East is approximately 40 minutes" Needs "The" before journey and the first comma should be a semi-colon.
 * ✅ Is there a particular reason why the journey time to Aldgate East was chosen. At it has already been mentioned, I suggest you give the journey time to Earl's Court instead, or to a major station such as Victoria.
 * ✅ Suggest link peak periods to rush hour.
 * ✅ I don't think that it is necessary to identify the type of train serving the station. This could change in the future.

Other issues

 * ✅ Suggest add clearleft after the text in the Design and Location sections so that the headings of the following section is placed under the image on a wide screen.DavidCane (talk) 00:27, 8 February 2010 (UTC)